Hyakujitsu no Bara (Maiden Rose) Fanfiction 18+

This is an old fanfic I wrote a few years ago. It is one of the most popular pages on my other blog where I posted it at first.

I wrote it as an alternative ending to the chapter that was out back then before the story continued in the manga. It was the continuation from when Claus got shot in the train and it exploded. I was so frustrated that I just had to write an ending to that one. LOL!

So because it's in english and it's my very first english yaoi story, I wanted to post it in this blog too so I have everything in one place.

Well, for you who have read that chapter may know that it ended with Klaus being shot by that Berkut-bastard. And the bomb went off too. Oh my! How did they survive?! And Taki's battalion was infiltrated by euroteans so the engineering corps didn't answer Taki's call. So Taki and his men had to hurry to the bridge-head so they could stop the eurotean train.  (O_o)

My continued story begins right after the fighting and stuff. (I'm not good at writing war stuff ya know...) And I haven't given it a title, 'cuz I don't know what I should call this one. But Anyway... Here it is:

Taki felt like the whole world was spinning. He was tired and exhausted. The fight was over and he could now take a rest. He sat on his knees in the cold sand and shook because of the freezing wind. His coat and sword was tainted with blood, and sweat drops rolled down his temples. Berkut lay on the ground in-front of him with open wounds inflicted by Takis sword, but he was still alive.

"Taki-sama! Are you alright?" Moriya asked with concern as he ran towards him.

"I'm fine." Taki answered - out of breath. "Take him to custody." he then said and looked at Berkut.

"Are you sure you're fine?" Suguri asked worriedly, but Taki just nodded firmly.

Moriya and a soldier lifted Berkut up and started to carry him away when he said with a quiet voice:

"Your knight... Do you think he's alive?" He laughed. "I shot him in the chest, and right after that the cart where he was in blew up. Do you think he survived that?"

Taki felt like the world came crumbling down upon him. Klaus ... dead? No, that couldn't be! Suguri placed his hand on Taki's shoulder and looked worried at him. After all - he knew how Taki felt about Klaus. He knew Klaus wasn't just Taki's precious knight.

"Shut up, you vermin!" Moriya yelled and hit Berkut in the gut. They carried him away.

"Klaus..."

Taki's voice died. He couldn't think straight and all he could do was look at the train and hope he'll see Klaus come out through the door to one of those ghostly carts with his usual arrogant smile on his face. But the train was dead quiet. Nothing moved inside it.

"Klaus...!"

His throat started to become too tight for him to breathe. He held his hand against his chest and leaned forward as he needed to vomit. His heart ached so much he couldn't describe it.

"Taki-sama! What's wrong?" Suguri asked and sat down beside him.

"I ... can't breathe!"

"Calm down, Taki-sama! I'm sure Klaus is fine!"

"I can't ... calm..."

Tears rolled down his cheeks as he tried to stop himself from crying out loud. He couldn't help himself. The forced breathing made him dizzy, and soon he fell to the ground unconscious.

"Taki-sama!"




Later he woke up in his room. He looked up at the ceiling and noticed he felt hot and sweaty. A fever? He sat up and noticed he was dressed in his pajamas. Someone had helped him home to his winter residence. Then he remember Klaus, and he was just about to get up from the bed when someone opened the door.

"You should be in bed and not wander around, Taki-sama." Suguri said as he walked towards him with a bowl of water and a towel in his hands. "I was just about to see to your condition." he then explained and put the bowl on the table next to Taki's bed.

"Have you found Klaus?" Taki asked, and Suguri gave him a little smile.

"We found both him and Azusa in the back of the train. They are resting in the temporary hospital tent."

"Thank God!"

Taki felt such a relief that he fell back on the bed and took a deep breath. Everything was going to be fine, he was sure of it. Now that Klaus had made it back to him alive he felt so happy he just wanted to cry.

"How are you feeling?" Suguri asked as he placed the wet towel on Taki's forehead.

"Much better now." Taki said and closed his eyes. "I want to see him."

"Rest a little more. He wont go anywhere."

"No, I need to see him." Taki said persistently and sat up again.

Suguri knew he couldn't do or say anything that would persuade Taki to stay in bed, so he stood up and nodded.

"Fine. I'll bring him here. He's not so badly wounded so he'll be fine. Just lie in your bed and wait here."

"Thank you." Taki murmured and lay down again in the bed. "Hurry, Klaus. I need to see you're fine."

He gripped the sheets and closed his eyes. He didn't now what to say to him, he just needed to see him.

After a few minutes the door opened and Klaus stepped in. He was supported by a crutch and was bandaged around his head and chest, but otherwise he seemed fine.

"You called ... my master?" Klaus said with a thin smile on his lips and looked at him.

"How are your wounds?" Taki asked quietly.

"They're fine. It takes more than a bullet and explosion to wipe me out. You know that." he said with a soothing voice, and Taki sat up in the bed to look at him closely.

"Come closer." Taki commanded, and Klaus obeyed. He took the remaining steps towards the bed until he bowed in-front of his master. "No, don't do that."

Klaus looked up at Taki and returned his gaze.

"Do you know how worried I was?" Taki said strictly, and Klaus laughed quietly.

He bowed again. "I apologies, my master."

"Don't you ever leave my side again!"

"I promise."

They both stayed quiet for a while. Neither of them knew what to say. After a while Klaus stood up and looked at Taki with hungry eyes, but then averted them.

"I'll leave you so you can rest. I was told you have a fever, so I wont disturb you anymore."

Just as he was about to leave he felt something grip his shirt from behind, and he looked over the shoulder. He saw Taki with a scared look on his face.

"Don't go." Taki said with a tiny voice. "Don't go."

Klaus was surprised. He couldn't hide his expression as he turned around again to see Taki's now troubled look. His eyes looked at the edge of the bed. Then Taki let go of Klaus's shirt and swallowed hard.

"I'm sorry. I just... I'm just ... so cold." he murmured, and Klaus thought he first heard wrong.

Did Taki just say he wanted Klaus to hold him? Impossible!

"Taki, what do you..." he started, but Taki interrupted him.

"You're my knight, so you shouldn't go. You belong right here with me... Because you're my knight. And ... you should ... do something... Because I'm cold."

"I'm right here." Klaus said with a soft murmur. "What do you want me to do, my master?"

Taki didn't look at him. He just took a shaky breath and bit down on his lip. Klaus didn't urge him to answer. He just waited.

Finally Taki uttered: "Warm me up. Because you're my knight..."

"Only as you knight?" Klaus asked, and Taki lowered his head a little to hide his face from him.

"No..."

Klaus knew that Taki had to keep up his performance as the shinkan, the maiden rose. He just couldn't let anyone touch him in any way that would harm his title as the shinkan. Even though his pride as the shinkan was already damaged he had to still play the role. No one knew of his and Klaus's relationship, so he could still pretend that he was pure for the sake of his men.

He also knew that Taki was a very kind-hearted man. Even though he seemed dangerous and violent on the battlefield, he still had his innocence and kindness. He was trained for being a fearless commander and giving orders. He couldn't waver in-front of his men. That was a tough burden, especially on someone as kind as Taki.

I bet you're scared when you give orders in battle, Klaus thought as he smiled at Taki. He sat down on the edge of the bed and leaned forward to look Taki in the eyes. His eyes was tightly shut and he seemed to try and fight back the tears that wanted to roll down his cheeks.

"Is this okay?" Klaus asked. "I've been tainted by the unclean land. I shouldn't touch you anymore, right?"

Taki shook his head.

"It does not matter to me. That unclean land is sacred. Nothing's unclean about it." he answered.

"It's just the sterile earth that gave it the name 'unclean', right?" Klaus asked. Taki nodded.

"Because of the war, the earth became like that. Nothing can grow there now. The trees and plants are dead, but it should not be called unclean. That is why you're not tainted by anything."

"So it's okay if I touch you like this?" Klaus asked and reached his hand to Taki's cheek and caressed it. Taki didn't answer or move. He just sat still. "And is it okay if I..."

Klaus leaned closer and planted a kiss on the corner of Taki's lips. Taki held his breath and gripped the sheets hard until his knuckles went white. He did want Klaus to kiss him, but he couldn't say it. He didn't know how to. He wasn't supposed to do things like this, but he couldn't help himself. He wanted to. He had to. He needed to.

"Is it okay even if I promised I wouldn't touch your body anymore?" Klaus asked next to Taki's ear.

A shiver ran down Taki's spine as he felt Klaus's breath next to his ear. He wanted more.

"It is ... fine." he said quietly.

"You sure?"

Taki nodded, and Klaus got a big smile on his lips. He pushed Taki down on the bed and held him tightly. His wounds hurt a little, but he didn't care. He was so happy that Taki had asked him to hold him that he didn't care about anything else than him. He knew that next day they would go back to normal, so he had to take this opportunity and use it for the fullest. The only explanation he had for Taki's behavior was that Taki was afraid to lose him. And this time it really was close for him to lose Klaus.

So I do have some value after all, Klaus thought as he kissed Taki's soft lips.

"I can't get enough of you, you know that?" Klaus said, and Taki looked him in the eyes but didn't answer.

Klaus kissed him again, and at first Taki didn't seem to want to answer his kisses. But after a while he began to open his lips a little and kiss him back, and Klaus kissed him with more force. He pushed his tongue inside Taki's warm mouth and explored it roughly. Their saliva mixed and their breaths mingled.

"Klaus... Don't...!" Taki said as he pushed Klaus back with all his might.

"Didn't you say you wanted me to hold you and warm you up?" Klaus asked, and Taki nodded nervously.

"I did, but I didn't say we could..."

"Have sex?" Klaus asked shortly, and Taki nodded again. "Did you think I could hold myself from wanting you when I haven't had you for a while?"

Taki looked at him with fear. He didn't want to fear him, but after everything Klaus had done to him he was uncertain and afraid to get hurt again like that. Should he resist, or should he give in?

"C'mon Taki. I wont be rough."

Without waiting for an answer he began to unbutton Taki's pajamas, and soon the shirt was wide open and exposed Taki's pale and beautiful chest. It began watering in Klaus's mouth as he saw it, and he started to play with Taki's nipple with the tip of his tongue.

Taki felt an electric wave run throughout his body that he couldn't help a moan escape him. It felt so good. He didn't want to fight back like he used to. Not tonight. He had been so close of loosing Klaus that he wanted to spend a night with him. Just one night. It wouldn't be that bad, right?

"Aren't you gonna resist?" Klaus asked and squeezed Taki's nibble between his fingers. Taki held back a moan.

"I have ... a fever. I'm too weak ... to resist." he lied and held a hand against his mouth to stop the moans from escaping him.

"Right..."

Klaus smiled and looked at Taki while he nibbled on his nipples. He loved the expression Taki made when he had these things done to him. It was clear that Taki liked it. But still he resisted by muffling his voice and trying to escape it. But Klaus knew why. It's all because of the title as the shinkan. He wants to have at least a fragment left of his pride.

Klaus's kisses went further down and reached soon the band of Taki's pajama trousers. He caressed Taki's crotch on-top of the trousers, and a moan escaped Taki again. Klaus smiled.

"You're so cute when you do that. But let me hear your voice. Let me see and hear you enjoying me." he said and lowered the waistline of Taki's trousers. "You're already overflowing down here. You sure you want me to stop?" he asked with a devilish smile.

Taki didn't answer. He just held his hands over his mouth and tried to be as quiet as he could. Klaus clucked his tongue and kissed the top of Taki's erect member. Taki shivered.

"Nnh!"

"You want it, don't you?"

Klaus began stroking Taki's member up and down really slowly, and Taki started to breathe heavier. Klaus removed Taki's trousers and threw them on the floor and then spread Taki's legs wide to lick his member from rot to top. He repeated it until Taki stopped him and looked at him with teary eyes.

"Do it ... properly." he whispered, and Klaus smiled wickedly.

"As you wish."

He took Taki's member in his mouth and began sucking on it. Taki couldn't stop the moans anymore, so he released his mouth and buried his fingers in Klaus's hair. He felt so sensitive today. Maybe it was because of the fever, but it felt like he was about to come already. Then he felt Klaus's wet finger against his rosy bud. It forced it's way inside and caressed Taki's inner walls.

"Aaah! Unh!"

"I like that sound, Taki. Make it again." Klaus whispered seductively and moved his finger around more roughly as he continued to suck Taki's member.

"Aaaaah! Klaus! Haaah! Ungh!"

Klaus really enjoyed hearing Taki this exited. He laughed. "Do you want to cum?"

Taki shook his head in protest. "Don't stop!"

Klaus continued to suck and finger him more urgently, and soon Taki felt like he was going to die a sweat death. His whole body shook violently and tears rolled down his temples. He wanted to scream. He couldn't take it any more. Everything went white before his eyes, and he felt like he was blown to oblivion. Then came a black-out.

When he came to Klaus was already unbuttoning his pants. Taki's head felt groggy and heavy, but he understood what Klaus was about to do. Could he do it with him? Could he give in like this and enjoy it? Did he have the right to do that as shinkan?

Whatever... he thought. He wanted it. He didn't want to care right now.

"Do you want it, Taki?" Klaus asked. "Do you want me inside you?"

Taki didn't answer. How could he answer?! It was an embarrassing question. Of course he wanted it now. He wanted it so badly, but didn't know how to say it. Klaus leaned closer and kissed him. Then he looked him in the eyes.

"I wont fuck you if you don't tell me to. You're my master, aren't you?" he said, and Taki blushed terribly.

Taki still didn't say it. Instead Klaus moved his hand downwards again and caressed Taki's hole. He teased it so bad that Taki thought he was going mad. He pushed the tip of his finger inside, but took it out again. Then he pushed it back insied and took it out again. Taki's body started to shake again.

"Say it, Taki Reizen. Say you want me to fuck you." Klaus commanded.

"Ungh...!"

"Say it!"

Taki couldn't take it anymore. The teasing his body was exposed for made him lose his mind.

"Put it in! Please put it in!" he begged, and Klaus smiled.

"Gladly."

Slowly he began to thrust inside Taki's body. At first it didn't want to let him in, but after he forced it a little Taki's body gave up the resistance and he thrust in smoothly. Taki moaned.

"Does it hurt?" Klaus asked.

Taki shook his head. "A little. But don't pull it out."

Klaus leaned forward and kissed him deeply. "As you wish." Then he started to thrust back and forth inside Taki.

All Taki could do was lie there and enjoy the feeling. It felt so good he wished the time would stop - give him an eternity of pure pleasure. His body didn't listen to him anymore. He wanted to raise his arms and put them around Klaus's neck, but they didn't move. They were numb of the pleasure he was given.

Soon the hurting vanished and he begged for more.

"Nnh! D-deeper... Klaus! Aaah! More!"

Klaus obeyed and thrust harder and deeper inside Taki. It was the first time he had been this deep inside Taki. He war buried to the hilt inside him. It felt so good. And it was so amazing that Taki enjoyed it for once. That he now moaned and almost screamed there where he lied in-front of him was an experience he didn't want to be the first and last. He wanted to see him like that every day - forever.

"Aaah! Klaus! Haah! Mmmh!"

"You feel so good, Taki. So damn good."

He pounded into him so hard he could. Taki cried of pleasure. They both enjoyed the other so much that they soon felt that release they both wanted.

"Aah! Ah! Klaus, I'm...! Haaaah!"

"I'll make you cum, Taki. Aah..."

Finally Taki's arms answered him and he drew Klaus closer so he could put them around his neck. He held him tightly and felt his breaths and moans against his ear. It felt so good. He closed his eyes and felt how he was about to suffocate because of the enormous orgasm that was building up inside him.

"I'm coming, Taki!"

"Not ... inside!"

Taki remembered how it felt when Klaus came inside him. It felt nasty when it oozed out of him afterwards.

"Don't worry. I'll help you clean you up." Klaus said between his moans.

You beast! Taki thought, but didn't say it out loud.

"Aah! Ugh...! More! Klaus!"

"Taki, I can't...!"

"AAH! AH!"

Taki felt faint. His head went blank and his breath left him for a moment. He threw his head back and couldn't breathe. Everything when white before his eyes again. At the same time he felt something warm fill him and knew Klaus came inside him.

"Ahh..."

Klaus fell on-top of him and breathed heavily. They both were sweaty all over and tried to catch their breaths.

"It was amazing..." Klaus said where he lied on-top of Taki.

Taki felt drowsy and weak. His body had gone numb and he could hardly think. But it didn't matter. As Klaus had said; it was amazing. But he knew that by tomorrow they would go back to their usual self. He needed to rest until his fever went down, and Klaus had to let his wounds heal. Tomorrow they were commander and knight again.

"Do you want to sleep, Taki?" Klaus asked and raised his body to look at the tired Taki. Taki just nodded.

Klaus placed himself next to Taki and pulled the sheets up to cover them. Then he placed his arm around Taki's waist and pulled him close.

"Now I'll warm you up." he said with a faint smile on his lips.

"Like I need it now." Taki answered and felt the sweat make the sheets sticky.

"I hope you'll have a fever every night. Then you wont be able to resist me." Klaus laughed, and Taki looked irritated at him. He knew Klaus knew that he had lied about him not being able to make resistance because of fever.

"Go to sleep." he muttered and turned his back against Klaus.

"Hey, that's mean, Taki." he complained, but Taki pretended not to hear.





So, that was my very first fan fiction, and it was in english! Oh my gosh! Be easy on me! I'm not so good at english! I'm sorry for all the mistakes in grammar I've made. (^_^,)

I was a little bit worried that the characters became out of character, and I tried my best not to make them too out of character when I wrote this. It took me 7 hours to write this! (O_o) But I'm pleased with it. Thank you for reading it! *bows*


I hope you at least enjoyed a little bit of it. (*^_^*)